A+ story

This is more along the lines of what I was hoping for in the story assignments, and it included me as one of the main characters!!

This is a story about a class which involves both very rich and very poor students. This special class is taken on by Miss Allison. There are 15 students who come from extremely rich families in the city, while the rest 15 ones are from very poor countryside families. Everyday rich students go to school by their own cars and they look so modern and luxurious. But in class, they never raise their hands and do their homework. They always talk on the phones, make noises, and show their bad behaviors to their poor friends, even the teacher. One day, the day after the final examination, Miss Allison called the student who had the best story about his mother (written in the exam) to retell the story to the class. The student was a rich one, and of course, it was not his own work. He was so scary, and Miss Allison gave the work for him to read in front of the class. Unfortunately, the story was about a girl who lost her mother. Everyone was shocked and they laughed at the boy. Naturally they realized that it was not his work. He was so ashamed, and admitted that the story was written by another student in class. Miss Allison was so surprised, but then she praised for his admission. She invited the girl who wrote the story to stand up and tell the class her own story. It was so emotive, that even the rich bad students had to break into tears. From then on the class changed and became a very good class.

Well-written, emotional, moral, portrays Ms. Allison as a benevolent hero, and has hints of class warfare? Well done, students.